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Hey Vic,
I like this one a lot! Just feels smooth........and a melody that sticks with you. V2, last line, I feel you could improve the prosody there. Maybe pause after "you......." then finish line faster rather than spreading everything out? Not real sure without playing and singing it a few times.
Enjoyed this'n though, great work!
steady-eddie
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