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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Soft Loft
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 11:52 AM
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8Graves
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/20/26 06:05 PM
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Saosin
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/20/26 02:43 PM
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Haha That's funny I don't care who you are.  Together/metaphor - now there's a rhyme for ya. I enjoyed this one - very entertaining. I think the response voice should be pushed further left, and maybe do a high pass filter on it so it sounds like an old radio voice? That would make it stand out better IMHO. Also I know it's hard but it could stand a haircut in length for folks with a short attention span like me But the back and forth with the voice in his head is a hoot - very creative Paul Thanks so much for the feedback, Paul. I did try a kind of radio effect on the response voice and didn't like the way it sounded, but I could probably do it a little more subtly and achieve the desired effect. I'm hoping I get some other suggestions from folks here before I get to work on that. Regarding the length, at just under 4 minutes, it's not super long, but I do prefer to keep it closer to 3:30 when I can. The only way I can see to trim it would be to cut verse 3 in half or replace it with a shorter bridge. That would save about 18 seconds, but I think it would lose something lyrically. My hope is that the sing-along chorus makes it feel shorter than it is
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