Vic/John,

I like this "Dire Straits" vibe. I was reading what Japov said and the chorus IMO does need to launch better. I, however, really like the using of the words "streets," as it's unique and phonetically, just sounds great. What I would suggest, is to empower that chorus, 1) pan the chorus guitar strums really wide R so that they don't compete with lead vox. 2) Thicken those chorus lines with a harmony, and "maybe" give it a "subtle dup lead vox track panned 40% L. I think this will enhance the chorus subtantially. Don't be afraid to change-up your attitude a bit more on certain lines as well to accentuate a few key lines making the overall performance less mellow in general.

I really like how the guitar answers flow throughout--experiment with some alternate panning or just a bit more panning--keeping center more for vox/bass/kick/snare. Cool lyrics and a very cool melody vibe--just needs a little polish to make it shine! Nice write--both of you.

steady-eddie