Singing it is not the problem, you have an attitude that works, its a fine blues vocal.

A melody change would change the lyric, which I didnt write.

I would never write something like this so it be hard to fix it.

Ive never heard a style like this before to be honest. Ive heard blues, ive heard gospel and christian music, but I never heard it presented in this way, usually gospel and christian songs are nice nice, this is like "if you dont like what im saying get the [naughty word removed] out of my way"

And it does reference Jail House rock in a strange different way.

I dont know if you mean it to come across that way. But i havent heard anything like it, which is good. Maybe there is more of this type of stuff out there I dont know.

This will never be a hit song, thats ok, most artists who put out albums have one hit out of twelve.

It could be a really good song. and is a good listen as is.

How bout slide....brrr brrrrr.. line
chord change line

something to break up the monotony.

I wouldnt listen to other Gospel songwriters, they will always say its good cause its about God.

I dont have that problem lollllll. God made me how I am and he's pleased...i think

But this is a song for the artist himself to sing, not to pitch to another artist