Definitely food for thought Dom

I like the central idea about our inherent gifts and restraints imposed on them

Not sure about starting and ending with the choruses...and having 5 of them...also might look at another "gift" and leave God out of it .ie..that V3 might be better used for something else that feels good but is made to feel so bad..

Finally...after that mamoth discussion, it might be a good idea to set thinngs aside for a bit...then come and revisit

You might decide to leave God out of it al together and place the limiting forces somewhere else?? dunno.

All in all nice to get back to music and lyrics


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop