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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Jun 2005
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There's two verses, the third part is the bridge...
I think it's just basic commentary in the verses, and then a collective...WHY GOD WHY IS IT THIS WAY, sort of bridge. It does change POV there, but Ive heard about that rule so often, and i see it broken all the time.
It's not anti God in anyway, just how many of us view things on Earth.
But I wrote this in under 5 minutes, not sure where it all came from but it came out.
I wouldnt seriously work on something like this, it's not worth it to me, doesnt do anything for anybody, not even entertaining!
When you say it's a bridge, it now makes sense. Don't sell yourself short on what you have written. You bring up some good thoughts, Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald
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