Hi Ed.
Thank you for your suggs.
I do already have a shorter version for radio which omits the first half of the last verse. That cuts it by about 20 seconds.
Oddly maybe though, the radio dj want's the long version.
I also already tried speeding it up by 5bpm but abandoned that idea as it sounded too bouncy.
I was trying to get the feel of Steve Earle's "Billy Austin". Not aiming at the "pop" style.

Thanks again,
Vic

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