Steve,

Thanks for the additional background into how you got the title line and all.

Indeed, we just have to look at what's happening in various States to know racism is still a big problem.

I was actually rooting for the structure to keep moving forward (on to D, E, F, etc...) --you hear that sometimes in modern operatic form but never in popular music. It can really keep a listener "in the moment" but perhaps at the expense of giving that same listener little anchoring.

Mike

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 09/02/23 05:14 PM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)