Originally Posted by bennash
No sense of humor , you guys are like a romantic comedy, you should get a room

The narrative of your song is too absurd and far fetched. No traction. F minus for concept.

Here is a better narrative. Put the following to a tune.

Dom = Moe
Tony = Larry
Bennash = Curly
John S = Shimp

Sunset Poet is the random"straight man" standing off to the side, aghast but laughing.

Turn the robots loose and see what they do with that. smile

With that, I bid you good evening.