Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
I think that the song is pretty good.

Florida is the title and is sung several times throughout the song, so to my ears the location is clearly established.

The songs appears to intend to be light-hearted and frolicking, and I think that it gets there.

Personally, I might have mentioned something about sitting in a lounger on a beach with an umbrella in my drink...

And maybe some geographical reference such as, "from the Keys to the Georgia line,"
(sea to shining sea)

But those are personal notes.

Pleasant tune.

Thanks Marty, I really appreciate that.

You understood exactly what I was going for - something fun, light-hearted, catchy, and full of Florida vibes.
I actually like your idea about adding a few more uniquely Florida references like “from the Keys to the Georgia line” or the beach lounger imagery. Those kinds of details could definitely help paint the picture even more. In almost every song there is room for improvement.

Thanks again for listening and for the thoughtful feedback!