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Florida
by Fdemetrio - 05/09/26 11:32 AM
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Real Deal
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/07/26 01:38 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/06/26 05:36 PM
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On top of lack of clarity, its a big so what laundry list of things.
New York that's whete I wanna be
Tourists racing,
Thugs defaming
Sky scrapers and Broadway
Statue of liberty
And MSG
Rats the size of dogs
New York is whete I wanna be.
Two seconds....
No connection to anybody, no emotion, get to work Thanks Dom. I get what you’re saying. Right now the song is intentionally more of a fun, feel-good Florida anthem than a deep personal story, but I do think you make a fair point about adding more emotional connection and less “laundry list.” That’s part of the songwriting process - refining what works and what doesn’t. I appreciate the honest feedback.
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