John...

First off...the song and your video is going to be perceived as insulting.
I believe that is so because it is intended to be.

So much for harmony.

Your videos are mildly interesting, but they seem too abstractly removed from the content of these "songs" to get "traction."

The music for the song does not strike me as a real good match.

To my ear and eyes, I hear a song about one thing, and am watching a video that could be about something else. Or could be about nothing specific at all.

I see the entire thing as a C-minus exercise in divisiveness.

One person's opinion.

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