The intro is longer than many of mine which you always brought out.

Nothing wrong with the video. But there is something in songwriting called prosody.

Its weird you think Rob is good at this. The music is all wrong, rhe pre chorus king?

you cant hear any of the sentiment, in that arrangement.

Just the use of the words Shameless Dweebfart, does nor sound right out of that singers mouth. Its a satirical comedic line fused into a serious power Ballad that essentially sounds like a love song.

I get hes trying to give it a big hook, but its not congruent.

I dont mind you saying how you feel, not the issue,.just my thoughts, in the end what matters is your enjoying it

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