Originally Posted by Rob B.
Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
No Rob, it doesn't work, its bad writing, whether I personally get it or not.

I understand what your trying to do, but that doesnt make it good

Theres not one clear cut line that says. How life is changing for the worse because of Ai.

Dom,
I understand you don’t think the song works, and that’s fine. Not every style or approach connects with everybody. You've probably never heard of The Rocky Horror Picture Show.

The connections and themes in the lyrics were intentional, and plenty of listeners understood what I was going for, even if you didn’t connect with it personally.

At the end of the day, songwriting is subjective.

Again, its not done, its the chorus, the verses are for filling in the dots.

Daddy at railroads and mom at school, are images yes, barely, but have nothing to do with Ai indoctrination.

It may have to do with change of worlds, things are much different than those simple times.

But it has nothing to do with the process of being groomed into like minded people

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 2 hours ago.