LOL Rob, being all bad together again I see.

First off, love the premise....the setup...the prison of the mind...locked inside storage rooms full of baggage

BUT IMO far more powerful if you make it timeless, applicable to those "in their own shadows", the "hidden", UNABLE to function because of what they deal with every day.

In more general terms....anything in this vein is now risks being seen as a simple pile on and only something clever, original and compelling will cut through the noise.

OR, like our Pay For It, rise up a little higher for a broader overview. We tackled all elites and decision makers

KOS as always.


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop