I'd agree needs a singer, or at least an effort to sing normally. Sounds too much like hemorrhoids. I don't think you have to sing that way.

I like the guitar sound, and howvthe chorus comes in, your good at catching the listener snoozing.

I think mentioning rich man and poor man in the verses takes away from the chorus.

Don't have to be so general, its more like reporting than a story.

guess you have a style.

Pretty cool

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