Well Tom........Overall I like it! I love your voice, you got that Neil Young thing going on which is awesome. The guitar opening is real nice!!
The only thing that I don't really like is the beat.....but I'm not a big fan of the whole computer generated rhtyhm thing, it fits the song, I just have a personal pet peeve with the electronic drum kit sounds. But what are you to do unless you are a drummer and have a acoustic kit in your studio.
But overall....very nice!
Melanie