I find it interesting and unique how you have used our language in this.
As a song, of course, I don't think it could work. But, it is different.

Kind of reminds me of one of those puzzles where the end of one sentence begins the next and they run together.
That might make an interesting song.

I agree, the idea is a bit unsettling

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