Ritt, this is awesome. It's also written in Calvinesque style. Did you realize that?

sensual LONGING
OUR HANDS ON THE WHEEL STRONGLY
a soft place to LAND
WHERE LOVERS BELONG

Personally, I don't think road rage belongs in this piece.


"Grits is one of those country-boy words that is both singular and plural-like deer, elk and sheep. I think the singular is appropriate when there's a modifier that makes it clear one is talking about something specific. Like, 'Grits are good for you, but these here grits is tasty.'"~~Joe Wrabek