Hi Ritt,
Yeah, sounds like a fast paced melody too. I'm not a fan of rap but looks like it could be "rapped" all right
I took the "devil's daughter thing to kinda' mean like the "dancing with the Devil" thing, which I take to mean kinda' flirting with disaster.
Kinda' outa' my territory but this V---

fast cars faster women
leaving rubber
skid marks, mark time
boy was I movin'

The women-movin' rhyme would be a pretty good stretch, even for a stretcher like me. Couldja' maybe get "swimmin' in, in place of movin' some way?
Mostly flows right along, fast like
Wy