Nice Job! I was a diskjockey and music director for about 14 years at a medium market radio...this song has hit potential if released at the right time...It sounds like something Alison Krouse and Union Station could do or even something she would produce at Rounder Records...musically I would not do anything to it since I think it sounds great in it's present form and I personally like lyrics that are deep and make you think and don't necessarily hit you strait up in the face...recording was very professional...keep up the good work and good luck on your pitch

Byron