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Hey Steve,
Good, solid theme.
The wrong "your" in there but nobody but a publ. would kick about it since it sings the same. (Well,Bopbbie'd get you for it but she ain't here. Where is that blonde anyway?)
Good hook but doesn't seem like it's tied in tight enough. Looks like it should be led into better the first time 'specially.
Maybe something about the sun coming up and he's still playing this game.
See what others say.
Good basis for a song. Been done, but what hasn't
Wy
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