Feels a bit Too-Loose, Lautrec!

(Tho as I continued readin', felt LOTS like Beatles' "Obla-Dee Obla-Da" song..)

The Hook's In There...but gets muddled by Chorus' 2nd line, methinks. "Tomorrow" (Properly spelled) DOESN'T "start Today"...("Yesterday's Tomorrow" does.)

Still..it's a fun Romp, & if it's got as good a musical bed as Obladee-Obladaa has, ya might even have a Hit on yer hands.

Good Luck with it, Amigo!
Big Guy-Hug,
Stan