roxy, this is a beautiful song. I would love to hear this in full production.

Now, let me give you a couple of opinions. Your voice is soulful, and you show beautiful emotion as the song progresses, but in the beginning you seem to be chopping up the notes a bit. I'd like to hear you smooth those out and linger on the in-between notes.

I get pretty distracted with the "bumpa bumpa bumpa" parts-- just don't like 'em in there. It pulls against the grain of the tune, I feel. Also like to see you do the beginning yourself, or at least without the male vocal. It doesn't blend with yours, and in fact, your voice is obscured by it. It made the beginning of the song too hard-- almost turned me off, but so glad I listened further!!

Now, with full production and some instrumentation to fill out the hollow areas (live playing band effect,) I think this song is gorgeous. Lyrics are superb, and go sooo smoothly with the feeling of the song.

Very nice. I can see the sun behind the curtain, here. Bravo.

Gina V

That's ME-- in the BAG!! (performing "Yer Blues")