MARTIN

Please edit your thread and paste the lyrics ....

Nice church intro.....sets up the story...Shows the love of his home

.....Nicely sung fits the tune well

My biggest suggestion is thus:

I wouldn't of said the LET ME DIE IN TEXAS outside of the chorus cause you state it enuff in the chorus....I think you could have something more to say here to add to the song...Repetition in chorus brings home title without stating it in the verses...I know you want to die in texas from the chorus plenty

Thats my take on it....

Well performed tune & sounds great....


Steve Altonian

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