Scott and Marlene noted the major nits--as far as "commercial" prospects, that would hurt it.
The only other thing I'd note is that there was a really big and really good country "standard" that the punch line was ---
"When I Die Just Let Me Go To Texas"
Title was " Texas When I Die"
Your's is quite a lot different so don't know how big a problem it'd be
You've got a good song though
Good luck with it
Wy

Last edited by Wyman Lloyd; 09/29/07 09:07 PM.