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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Aug 2007
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Melissa,
This is really good IMHO. Flows quite nicely most of the way through. Just a few little suggs. that may help that.
Chorus:Line 4 doesn't roll off the tongue as well as the rest
LEAVIN' BOTH OUR BRIDGES BURNED
Line 5
WE REALLY COULD'VE HAD SOMETHING
Line 6
LOST IN NIGHTS THAT MEANT NOTHING
Bridge:
Line 3 THE GOOD TIMES, WE CAN SAVOR
Line 4 BUT LET'S MOVE ON WITH OUR LIVES
Really not too much to nit here. It reads like a country ballad about mid-tempo to me. I can hear it. With just a little work, it's a winner to me.
Sincere thoughts,
Jan
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