Hi Calvin,
Now "there" is a title that I doubt has been used.
Looked good to me. I wanted the last C line to rhyme with something
If you haven't got music or if it's not finalized, a possibility might be something like--------------------------------------------
No way out, no way out, doom"
Cause, the last camel died before noon-------
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You may like it just as is though.
Good writing
More coffee
Wy