Hi Lynn,

Well, I agree with everyone who's posted so far! This has a familiar sentiment and you write with a certain ease that shows up as it's read. I think some real pretty music would dress this up nicely. The bridge is what I would say to look at if I’m to add something constructive. I don’t know what I was expecting, (if anything), but I find myself wanting to sink my teeth into some juicy detail there…don’t know what exactly…or maybe a different time in their lives? Just thinking out loud...

Oh, and Lynn, look at the second to last line: ”Just let love just us how” typo there…I only point it out because it really interfered w/the end feeling there as my brain got befuddled!! Lol crazy

Good luck with it! smile

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist