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Love this, Wendy. I'm becoming a huge fan of your writing. Lines like this are perfect in their simplicity:

Oh, little bird..
Where have you flown?
The nest has grown quiet
Since you've been gone

And this particular combination of adjectives and noun is fabulous:

That bright and shining lie

And this is another example where you turn an idea or image on its ear to come up with something astounding:

Sometimes I hear wings beating
Beneath the earth's soft loam

Of course, none of those would mean anything if the song had no "big picture". But you have that too.....

Beautiful stuff!

Scott