Got To Echo what others say

For a beginer it's very catchy, keep at it it's a simple hook
straight to the point, we dont want novels.

Keep it up, maybe link up with a lyric writer on some future songs. as well , you could have a Hit.

Have been working at E.M.I. Hayes U.K. in many departments starting as Tea Boy and worked through to A and R, New Artist Management,
Co Writing , with Boy Bands, and some solo acts
I have always played in bands,

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