Here is one called Take You Home. I guess it sounds kinda country, but I am not sure about a genre, if it matters.

I am looking for feedback!

Thanks for checking it out.

Take You Home


Take You Home Copyright © 2008 Colin Ward

V1
On a long and empty train bound for Tampa
An eerie brooding fog filled the air,
I put my northern clothes in my suitcase
& I tried to think of ways to make you care

Ch
Take you home with me,
Gonna take you home with me
Take you back to Richmond,
That's our home

V2
I saw those Georgia pines sliding by me,
Florida sand and sun can't be far,
The factories and the marshes of Savannah,
Gave way to grand hotels and tiki bars

Ch
Take you home with me,
Gonna take you home with me
Take you back to Richmond,
That's our home

Br
I hear you're pouring beers for wayward tourists,
Making fancy tips for half the year,
I'm planning to catch up with you in Gulfport,
Making my intentions truly clear

Ch
Take you home with me,
Gonna take you home with me
Take you back to Richmond,
That's our home

V3
Well I know you fell in love with sandy beaches
& I know you like the sunshine every day,
I know that you love the balmy weather,
Maybe I should join you here and stay

Ch 2
I'll stay here with you,
I'll stay here with you,
I'll stay here in Gulfport,
Call it home


Colin

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