Hi Colin,

I liked the overall feel of this one, but I'm geographically confused. You're on a train to Tampa to find your woman and take her back home to Richmond, VA. You go through Georgia, planning to catch her in Gulfport, MS. Isn't that the other way? Then you're in Gulfport and plan to stay there with her. Now, somehow the title, Take You Home, isn't as effective. Am I missing something?

Ricki