Hi Darius

Nice to meet you those darn ssses ! wink

Nice song/nice hook! - I like how your chorus melody really jumps out. Nice touch and falsetto!

I think you could halve the intro..

Below I've gotten rid of a few 's' and words...... it gives you room to breathe.... I only notated the 1st vs and ch, to give you the idea...... I think if you try singing it this way you can give more to your Already great voice and delivery.. Something to try in any event.... no Good material was lost in this edit wink Best wishes. smile jm

Monster
Am I real (pause/breath) or imagination
Living life (pause/breath) in crowded isolation
Did my biology (pause/breath) frighten you
I'm your monster (pause/breath)and I'll remind you

If you can, only see through me
INSIDE you'll,(pause/breath) find a heart beating
you will,(pause/breath) find a spirit slowly dying
Then you will know I'm just a man

Who needs a lover
Touch my fingers, you will discover
I can feel anything that you do
I'm your monster and I will remind you


If you can, only see through me
INSIDE you'll, find a heart beating
you will, find a spirit slowly dying
Then you will know I'm just a man

I'm a reflection of your own rejection
Everything you wanted so bad
why blame me, if I quit on this world gone mad
I'm a slave and not the master
Of this mad impulse I must obey
Maybe love will help me find my way

Did my psychology disturb you
I'm your monster and I'll remind you
I can feel everything you do
I'm your monster and I 'll remind you


If you can, only see through me
INSIDE you'll, find a heart beating
you will, find a spirit slowly dying
Then you will know I'm just a man

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