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Hey you two....

So this is what I've been missing out on, playing with my froggies?! :o

Man, this one is SMOKIN'! Caroline -- hot, powerful and yes, simple lyrics...Letha, as always a sultry, inspired performance. Love the "back-up singers"...and how the music rises and falls to match the "teasing/I'm in control/I'm setting the pace tonight, baby!" play of the lyric.

The only teensiest of nits I had was the ending of the bridge:

And if you can’t handle this one little request
I’m sure there’s someone, (somewhere) who’d try their best

For some reason, this doesn't fit right to me...she's not suggesting he's not going to try his best, she just wants him to shut up and do what she tells him to (in a nice way, of course). How about any of these?

And if you can’t handle this one little request
I’m sure there’s someone, (somewhere)...

...WHO WON'T SECOND GUESS
...WHO'LL LOVE/DO/TRY WHAT I SUGGEST
...WHO'D LOVE TO TAKE THE TEST
...I COULD PUT TO THE TEST

I don't know that any of these are much better, and frankly, I stopped for only a nano-second anyway. I would be perfectly content if you left it alone....just wanted to call it to your attention.

But again, AWESOME WONDERFUL JOB, both of you. Needless to say, I'm anxious to hear Mike's treatment....

Cheers,
Beth