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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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PETE
by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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Nice inspirational thoughts, here. I can see you built this to be wrapped around a really cool, rocking chorus, but I'd like to see some story in those verses, personally. Something relatable that would really drive the chorus home. I think maybe "Sorry" would be a more describing and memorable title for this, since your current title is only used in the tag. One other nitpicky thing, 'ignorant' is a really hard word to sing...how about change the line to "I'm so stupid"? Just a thought. Nice potential in this one...just needs more storyline development. Good luck with it!
Corey
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