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Hi Jean

All Really Cool suggestions.. I'm gonna discuss it with Calvin - but I wanted to thank you for the great input... I have actually been planning a shorter take without repeating that phrase....... I Do Like Isolating and Ending ON the hook..... but I'll ponder this more. Thanks a Huge bunch for your time and tuning into this song. jm


Hi Again Jean

after considering and consulting with Calvin -- I think we're gonna leave it as YOu because.....

it works for US -- in the sense that It IS a conversation between 2 people --- but in making that point the singer is referencing the Universal 'YoU" which is totally acceptable in literature...........

BuT I do hope to do and edited version without repeating the hook line twice at some point in the near future.

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