This is lovely, Janice. An all-round excellent collaboration. smile

My only nit is that I was a little confused as to the sequence of events. I wasn't sure who was singing the part 4 (maybe indicate the verses) - the child or the father. Perhaps the first line could read something like:
My own Dad ran out when I was twelve

Keep or sweep. wink

Donna


Honour the Earth. Without it, we'd be nowhere.

Life is too important to take seriously.