Greg, I don't really thinks it's much concern, just introduces who seems like the main character sooner. Since this is about missed opportunities, wasted years and hurt, it may be helpful to have him show up earlier.
Not a huge issue, but this is full of potential, there's no reason to not cover every little detail.
As I said though, great work, completely enbjoyed the listens.


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