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Thanks for looking guys. I think the first verse is really the attention getter, then the chorus reflects real life things he's gonna do to "put himself out there" instead of just waiting for her to show up.
To that end, I think it might need some more real life examples.
The next time that waitress smiles at me, I'm gonna get her number.
or...
or examples of when he DIDN'T take the opportunity
like
when his buddies told him to come out to the honky tonk and a girl asked him to dance and he said no.
Any thoughts?
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