This is a silly song I wrote about my neighbor. Who, thankfully, did survive. I need for you guys to tell me if you think this is humorous. Better yet, do you think others will find it funny?

It's obviously traditional country. Do Christian artists ever do anything silly? Do you think this is a fit or not? Thanks.

P.S. Yes I know, too much reverb, vocal is hot, etc. It's just a rough demo that needs work.

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BILLY'S GOT AN ANEURYSM
(copr)2007 Bill Pittman

Billy's got an aneurysm, it's internal terrorism
Let's hope he's had baptism, everybody pray
Wife and daughter scared to death, sorry, Billy, I said death
You just breathe a lot of breaths, it's gon' be okay

[CHORUS:]
Pray, brother, pray
Pray, sister, pray
We'll keep that Reaper at bay
Pray, pray, pray

Ain't no need for pessimism, they gon' get the aneurysm
You should think futurism, come on Billy, try
But word is there's a little catch if you let this make you a wreck
Limber up and start to stretch and kiss your butt Goodbye

[ CHORUS - REPEAT ]

Yeah, life is full of ups and downs, sorry, Billy, I said down
Come on, man, wipe that frown, negative won't do
Listen Billy, this is key, if you wake up, try to pee
If bed is wet, glory be, you have made it through

[ CHORUS - REPEAT ]
You'll see another day
Pray, pray, pray