Hi Ricki,

Very good writing, and the music is a great match.

"Once past what the eye can see
Nothing's quite what it seems"

--wow...

...and more subtly

"Raven tattooed on a pearl sky
You still see it when you close your eyes"

--is quite beautiful.

Beautiful song. I love the maj7 chords, and the ending which hints at a four maj7th is a really nice touch.

Mike


Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)