Hi Ricki

This is a really enjoyable listen - especially the guitar playing. I like the little scale runs that you are doing here. Nice chords. Nice bad boy story ..... I kept thinking that it would work as a beauty queen story line somehow too. with some lyrical adjustments, of course.....

like...............

The Fragile beauty of a hard life
Bad love, serious strife
Marilyn eyes, a ruby red grin
It's a face that will pull you in


maybe because there's such a sweetness in your melody - I think that the music is more feminine somehow....

But it is all very enchanting and very nice imagery. I like it. jm

Last edited by Joice Marie; 02/15/10 10:05 PM.

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