G'Mornin' Bro Larry!

Like It overall, but of course, Here Come Some Sugs in the KOS Catetgory, Amigo!

V1: Last Line: "WITH SOME grease in the fryin' pan"

CHORUS: "They kiss but never tell..NO ONE.." (Gives ya a Rhyme to make Hook stronger..JMO/KOS)

V2: "WITH subtle grace..she makes HER kill"

That'll do it. Overall, GOOD'N' Bro...

Good Luck with it...Best "Cougar Song" I've seen so-far!
Big Guy-Hug,
Stan