I think it's a nice song and works well with the lyric.

Your singing voice is actually very pleasant. In a few places, I think it would be worth experimenting with the singing melody slightly to make the note changes more distinct. Staying within the existing chords, though, I mean. I suspect that it's your nervousness about singing that steers you away from doing that, but your voice is fine so just work on bringing out the melody that's already there.


Steve Cooke
Stockton-on-Tees, UK
http://wwww.soundcloud.com/stevecooke