hi JAn,

Nice job on this one. It's got a great visual throughout the song and a truly unique sound as well. As previously mentioned the guitar and vocals fit the song great. The comment about changing the line to "their sons" does clear it up a bit--but as Scott mentioned that's a pretty small thing. When I listened to the song it didn't stand out and I wasn't confused so it's probably a thing on paper you might catch more than when you listen to the song. not sure if I would worry about that. You guys definitely got a unique catchy song here. I can see why you're going to a full production. Good job,
Roger


Roger Sosnowski
The happiest people in life are those involved in music