This made me think of that novelty tune about Marie Laveau for some reason. Not that Belle Cady is practicing voodoo, but just the idea of a forbidden, mysterious woman I suppose. I think the music and vocal sound really good and match the lyric well. Lyrically, I think this would pull the listener in more if it were in a first-person perspective, told by one of the young men who "traded his youth" so to speak. Right now, it's a third person account and though it's very descriptive and well written, it seems to be missing something to me. Just my two cents of course, which is just one opinion and might not hold water.