The only two I can really comment on is Heart/Apart (or start)
and Love/Above.

I can assure you I have been told several times by people whom I have PAID for good advice to not use those words/rhymes in my songs. And they proved why I should not use them when they sang their own songs that had those very same words in them.
The experts have used them all up.

Of course any filler words are out. Write tight.

Last edited by Bill Robinson; 06/06/10 04:44 PM.

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