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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/15/26 04:35 AM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/15/26 02:10 AM
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Joined: Nov 2006
Posts: 1,435
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Top 200 Poster
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Hi Shirl..
I like this verse. Money doesn't grow on trees, but it's growing on a vine.
Gonna take a pair of scissors
and clip some roses off my neighbors vine
sure - I will leave a note and some dollar bills
Just to make up and ease my mind
This line doesn't flow right. Seems rushed at the end. Maybe drop the beginning "I" or maybe it's the triple rhyme at the end.
I don’t want this to be another love song gone wrong
Great production. Enjoyed it.
Rick
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