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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/26/26 12:29 AM
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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/26/26 12:29 AM
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Wendy Woo
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Hi Kate,
Seemed like it could have a melody like that of, "I'm Not Sayin" by Gordon Lightfoot
I had an idea pop up that I personally would do. I hope you can appreciate that "I can't leave without my heart" is a good Country hook that I've given you.:
I知 not saying that it痴 easy I知 just telling you the truth And I知 not sure that you値l believe me Even though I really need you to Cause I知 not staying here forever I知 not ready for that part You know that someday I値l be leaving BUT I CAN'T LEAVE WITHOUT MY HEART
CHORUS YES for now you have my heart HOW MUCH LONGER I CAN'T SAY BUT YOU STOLE IT FROM THE START
(or for a longer chorus three more lines and a Chorus rhyme scheme of ABACDC)
ETC., ETC.
Cheers, Terry
P.S. Went back and looked at Polly's contribution. If you used my idea the song title might become "I can't Leave Without My Heart" or "Without My Heart" in which case Polly's section could become a nice bridge.
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